Hey Thothslibrary awesome job on the artwork. So for a school project of mine, I have to make a magazine and the topic I really wanted to focus on was Digital Art. I was wondering would it be okay for me to feature this piece of work specifically for my magazine, however I intend to make slight revisions within the artwork.
I promise I will give full credit towards you and not pass this piece of work as my own nor will I use your artwork for anything else expect this academic assessment. Please inform me if you would for me to send you a copy of the revisions I have made.
If you do enter it in the Movie Poster Contest...you should probably change the picture of Blake though, her background is too black and it blends in with her clothes so you don't get to see much of the picture, just blobs of white.
Oh my goodneess, I really love this piece. But there were some things that just irked me. I felt as if the design around Red and White had more detail and focus as compared to Black and Yellow.Another thing was that the design around Black (the fumes/smoke/shadow thing) could really be improved because, first of all, it's kind hard to see.(I feel sorry to say that because i'm thinking about how to solve it and I'm like HOW DO YOU SOLVE IT?!) Second of all, it's kinda dull and nonrepresentational of Black. (I know. This is really hard to fix too.). Other than some minor details, well done!
Thankyou for this helpful comment! I was going to give this piece another little re-do before the premiere of the show (mainly because Ruby's proportions were bugging me. So its nice to get some helpful critisims. I agree with your points you made and I'll try my best to fix them As for 'nonrepresentational of Black' would it make it better if I said the shapes were little crows? I couldn't really think of anything better, and its a mistake on my part if the viewer cannot see this Also I may try giving Black's colour a slight purple hue so it will stand out a little more.
Thanks for considering my suggestions! I think crows are good. There's this line in the Red theme saying, "Black the beast descends from shadows." And somehow I keep picturing those huge wolves Red fights. *-* Or maybe Adam could work. It's hard to find something for Black.